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I'm a exactly pet lover, because I like pet very much,despite I don't have a pet. I think, pet become a friend to people who feel lonely and don't have friends. So they can get a consolation from their pet and reduce their stress. Sometimes I hope to have a pretty puppy, but because of many reasons, I can't get it. Anyway, pet have many merits.
And, although I want to a pet like puppy and cat, etc, I don't want to raise a snake as a pet. Because a snake is so strange animal which have a scare and bad sence. So I don't want it.
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I'm a exactly pet lover,
>>I’m exactly a pet lover,
because I like pet very much,
>>because I love pets very much.
despite I don't have a pet.
>>I don’t have a pet though.
I think, pet become a friend to people who feel lonely and don't have friends.
>>I think, pets can be a friend to people who feels lonely and for those who doesn’t have friends.
So they can get a consolation from their pet and reduce their stress.
>>Having a pet can make them feel better and it reduces stress too.
Sometimes I hope to have a pretty puppy, >>correct
but because of many reasons, I can't get it.
>>but because of some reasons, I can’t have it .
Anyway, pet have many merits.
>>Anyway, pets have many merits.
And, although I want to a pet like puppy and cat, etc,
>>I wanted to have a pet like a puppy or cat and other kinds,
I don't want to raise a snake as a pet.
>>but, I don’t want to raise a snake as a pet.
Because a snake is so strange animal
>>Because a snake is a strange animal,
which have a scare and bad sence.
>>it can be scary and it has a bad sense too.
So I don't want it.>>correct
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