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2010-11-08 · 첨삭 강사 Tina

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I'm a exactly pet lover, because I like pet very much,despite I don't have a pet. I think, pet become a friend to people who feel lonely and don't have friends. So they can get a consolation from their pet and reduce their stress. Sometimes I hope to have a pretty puppy, but because of many reasons, I can't get it. Anyway, pet have many merits. And, although I want to a pet like puppy and cat, etc, I don't want to raise a snake as a pet. Because a snake is so strange animal which have a scare and bad sence. So I don't want it.

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Hi [이름], Happy Monday! I hope you are doing fine. Please study the corrections. You are doing pretty good! Enjoy the rest of the day! See you J   I'm a exactly pet lover, >>I’m exactly a pet lover, because I like pet very much, >>because I love pets very much. despite I don't have a pet. >>I don’t have a pet though. I think, pet become a friend to people who feel lonely and don't have friends. >>I think, pets can be a friend to people who feels lonely and for those who doesn’t have friends. So they can get a consolation from their pet and reduce their stress. >>Having a pet can make them feel better and it reduces stress too. Sometimes I hope to have a pretty puppy, >>correct but because of many reasons, I can't get it.   >>but because of some reasons, I can’t have it . Anyway, pet have many merits. >>Anyway, pets have many merits. And, although I want to a pet like puppy and cat, etc, >>I wanted to have a pet like a puppy or cat and other kinds, I don't want to raise a snake as a pet. >>but, I don’t want to raise a snake as a pet. Because a snake is so strange animal >>Because a snake is a strange animal, which have a scare and bad sence. >>it can be scary and it has a bad sense too. So I don't want it.>>correct

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