homework

2013-08-05 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

학생이 쓴 원문

We must thinking nabout my bad habit again. and we must try to do good habits. Most important thing is try to kick the bad habits. Then oneday,you will be a perfect human.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Wu [이름]! How was your weekend?! I hope it was well-spent.~ As I checked your homework over, I noticed that it needs more^^ Come on! You can do it~^^ Try to elaborate your paragraph more by using colorful adjectives and vivid examples.^^ Good luck! Let\'s see: We must thinking nabout my bad habit again. >> We must think about our bad habits again.and we must try to do good habits.>>and we must try to do good habits. >>OR: We must think about our bad habits again and and we must try to do the good ones.  Most important thing is try to kick the bad habits.>>The most important thing is to try kicking the bad habits. Then oneday,you will be a perfect human. >>Then one day,we will be perfect humans.

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·