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2013-08-05 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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1. Is he changed much over the years 2. Has she polish 3. Does he like to drive at night 4. Do you normally read before you go to bed 5. Do I look tired ? Hi cam I am back I took a class five times a week last month but I cut dowm the number of class, three times a week when I renewed the class this month Taking a class everyday made me busy and stressed, so I reduced the number of class I hope that you continue to teach me

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Hello there Sir [이름]!! Nice to know that you are back my dear I missed you! Cant wait to hear your voice again my dear..;) Thanks for sending in this composition! :) Please try to review the corrections I\'ve provided here. By the way, thanks for re-enrolling here with us. ^^ See you in class Sir [이름]! xoxoT.Cam^^ 1. Is he changed much over the years >> Has he changed much over the years?2. Has she polish >> Is she a Polish?3. Does he like to drive at night >> CORRECT!!4. Do you normally read before you go to bed >> CORRECT!!5. Do I look tired ? >> CORRECT!!Hi cam >> Hi Cam!I am back >> I am back!I took a class five times a week last month >> CORRECT! .but I cut dowm the number of class, three times a week when I renewed the class this month >> But I cut down the number of classes into three times a week when I renewed the class this month.Taking a class everyday made me busy and stressed, so I reduced the number of class >> Taking a class everyday made me busy and stressed, so I reduced the number of my classes in a week.I hope that you continue to teach me >> I hope that you can continue teaching me.^^

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