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Hello [이름]! ^^
Thanks for sharing your thoughts here.
I do understand how you feel.
The stress at work and stress at home.
Having children at home is really stressful but it\'s the happiest thing that happened in the family life.
So don\'t you worry too much.
Thinking about it will makes you more stress out.
Okay? So smile!
I\'ll see you during our class!
Have a great day! ^^
T. Chelsea
Q) What is the hardest thing that you have to do? Did you do it or not? Why?
>> Nowadays, the hardest thing for me is to take care of my daughter after work.
>> OR:
Nowadays, the hardest thing for me is taking care of my daughter after work.
Even though, I take care of 1 hour or 2 hours, It is certain very difficult working of mind and body.
>> Even though I only take care for 1 to 2 hours, it is certainly physically and mentally difficult.
My wife is taking care of my daughter all day long, I am sure my wife gets a lot of stress for baby care.
>> My wife is taking care of my daughter all day long and I am sure that she is having a lot of stress in taking care of our baby.
I want my daughter to grow up quikely and understand my words.
>> I want my daughter to grow up quickly so she can understand me.
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