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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: What are the signs of a person who will likely to commit suicide? What should you do about it? Korea is one of the countries which has a high rate of commiting suicide. Nowadays, many famous people commited suicide in succession like our ex- president, many celebrities,, So, many ordinary people are also affected and feel suicidal with shock. People who commit suicide usally suffer from severe depression they easily feel gloomy. So, in order to big accident, people who are close to them have to care for them, observe personally and if they feel that it is big problem, they have to take them to the specialist and treat them. They usually become letargic in thir lives, get stressed very much and are in agony. So, we have to take attention to our close people and give love to them.

Good Evening! Thank you very much for doing your homework. You did a wonderful job in expressing your thoughts. Please try to read my corrections and learn from it. Feel free to ask question in our class. See you! T. Lorraine HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: What are the signs of a person who will likely to commit suicide? What should you do about it?Korea is one of the countries which has a high rate of commiting suicide.>>Korea is one of the countries that has a high rate of commiting suicide.Nowadays, many famous people commited suicide in succession like our ex- president, many celebrities,,>>Nowadays, many famous people a commited suicided like our ex-president and other celebrities.So, many ordinary people are also affected and feel suicidal with shock.>> So, many ordinary people are also affected and are shock because of it.People who commit suicide usally suffer from severe depression they easily feel gloomy. >> People who commited suicide usually suffer a severe depression that easily makes them feel gloomy. So, in order to big accident,people who are close to them have to care for them, observe personally  and if they feel that it is big problem, they have to take them to the specialist and treat them.>> So, to avoid this circumstances from happening, people who are close to them should care for them and observe their behavior. If the problem becomes serious, they should bring them to a specialist.They usually become letargic in thir lives, get stressed very much and are in agony.>> They are usually lethargic about their life and get so much stress. They are also in agony.So, we have to take attention to our close people and give love to them. >>So, we have to pay attention to the people and love them.