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Hi kay It's been a long time. I had a great holiday last week and I missed your class! Homework that you gave me was " What is the best movie I have ever seen" Love actually is the best movie to me so far. First of all, I love an actor Hugh Grant secondly, the movie says various love stories that I can see every day every where. Third, love actually make me feel watching defferent movie whenever I watch that. Although love actually was presented 10 years ago, it's not oldfashioned at all. So, once a year I watch love actually. Telling my story, we can go back to 6 Years ago. I just tried to watch love actually to study english. But after whatch that, I was crazy about that movie. One of stories like my story and I could more concentrate on that. It was sketchbook propose scean. Eventhough, One-sided love was make me sad, but it was beautiful on the other hand. What is your best movie?

Hello Ms. [이름]!   Welcome back! Its nice to see that you did your homework before our class.^^ Anyway, I\'m so glad that you had a great summer vacation last week, I missed you too! I want to hear all of your stories about your holiday!   I also love watching romance because its very insipiring the the actors are handsome! ^^ I will share you my favorite movie during our class. ^^ See yah!   Teacher Kay ^.^   Hi kay >>Hi Kay (Please take note of the Capitalization of names^^)It\'s been a long time. >>Correct! I had a great holiday last week and I missed your class!>>Correct!Homework that you gave me was \" What is the best movie I have ever seen\" >>The homework that you gave me was: \"What is the best movie I have ever seen?\" (Take note of the punctuation marks ^^)Love actually is the best movie to me so far. >>Love actually, is so far the best movie for me.First of all, I love an actor Hugh Grant >>First of all, I love the actor named Hugh Grant.secondly, the movie says various love stories that I can see every day every where. >>Second, the movie tells about the various love stories that I can see everyday and everywhere.Third, love actually make me feel watching defferent movie whenever I watch that. >>Third, Love actually makes me feel like I am watching a different movie whenever I watch it.Although love actually was presented 10 years ago, it\'s not oldfashioned at all. >>Although Love actually was a movie created 10 years ago, its still not old-fashioned at all.So, once a year I watch love actually.>>So I watch Love actually once a year. Telling my story, we can go back to 6 Years ago. >>To tell you my story, we can go back 6 years ago.I just tried to watch love actually to study english. >>I just tried to watch Love actually to study English. But after whatch that, I was crazy about that movie. >>But after watching, I was crazy about the movie.One of stories like my story and I could more concentrate on that. >>I can relate to one of the stories and I could concentrate on that.It was sketchbook propose scean. >>It was the sketchbook proposal scene. Eventhough, One-sided love was make me sad, but it was beautiful on the other hand.>>Eventhough one-sided love can make me sad, on the other hand,it was still beautiful.What is your best movie? >>Correct! >>BETTER: What is the best movie for you?