homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I think the lightball is the most useful invention.
Because it made our planet was bright .
And the most useless invention is smartphone.
Because it made all the kids is playing smartphones.
Even the baby playing the smartphone.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Tom!
Whoa I was impressed with your opinion regarding this topic.
Being so young, I was glad that you are able to realize the most useful and useless inventions.
Some of the inventions can help, but some just can\'t.
Let\'s see:
I think the lightball is the most useful invention.
>>I think the light ball is the most useful invention.Because it made our planet was bright .
>>Because it makes our planet bright.And the most useless invention is smartphone.
>>And the most useless invention is the smartphone.Because it made all the kids is playing smartphones.
>>Because it makes all the kids toy with this gadget.Even the baby playing the smartphone.
>>Even a baby can play this.
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