Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I read a essay last Sunday.
I attracted the title of the book.
It is a Korean book. I don't know the exact English title.
The title of the book is maybe 'Wind on the strange bed'.
The sub title is 'Erotic and strane travel essay'.
I read it very easily and rapidly.
It is very impressing and interesting.
And I thought about my love and life.
강사 첨삭
Hello there again Ma\'am Eun Young You seemingly trying to indulge yourself in reading essays. Great! It is a good way Ma\'am to enjoy and kill time. It\'s nice to live life to its fullest and enjoy a stress free time with yourself. Take a rest now Ma\'am [이름]!
-Teacher Chloe
I read a essay last Sunday.
>>I read an essay last Sunday.I attracted the title of the book.
>>I am attracted by its title. It is a Korean book.
>>CORRECT!
I don\'t know the exact English title.
>>CORRECT! The title of the book is maybe \'Wind on the strange bed\'.
>>CORRECT! The sub title is \'Erotic and strane travel essay\'.
>>Its subtitle is \"Erotic and strange travel essay\". I read it very easily and rapidly.
>>CORRECT!It is very impressing and interesting.
>>It is very impressive and interesting. And I thought about my love and life.
>>It makes me thinkg about my love life.
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