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2013-08-06 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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I read a essay last Sunday. I attracted the title of the book. It is a Korean book. I don't know the exact English title. The title of the book is maybe 'Wind on the strange bed'. The sub title is 'Erotic and strane travel essay'. I read it very easily and rapidly. It is very impressing and interesting. And I thought about my love and life.

강사 첨삭

Hello there again Ma\'am Eun Young You seemingly trying to indulge yourself in reading essays. Great! It is a good way Ma\'am to enjoy and kill time. It\'s nice to live life to its fullest and enjoy a stress free time with yourself. Take a rest now Ma\'am [이름]! -Teacher Chloe I read a essay last Sunday. >>I read an essay last Sunday.I attracted the title of the book. >>I am attracted by its title. It is a Korean book. >>CORRECT! I don\'t know the exact English title. >>CORRECT! The title of the book is maybe \'Wind on the strange bed\'. >>CORRECT! The sub title is \'Erotic and strane travel essay\'. >>Its subtitle is \"Erotic and strange travel essay\". I read it very easily and rapidly. >>CORRECT!It is very impressing and interesting. >>It is very impressive and interesting. And I thought about my love and life. >>It makes me thinkg about my love life.

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