homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1.herself
2.them
3.her,me
4.himself
5.her
Yesterday, I played in a swimming pool with my friend.
We were snorkeling.
Snokeling was fun
But the water is dirty.
I thought that water is the most dirty.
So I feel bad,Anyway, I had fun in there
강사 첨삭
Hello, Tom!
Whoa~ You really love the water.
I am envious again T^T
I can imagine how fun it is to play with your friend.
Congratulations! You perfected your homework!! *clap*
I am so proud of you!!^^
1.herself
>>CORRECT!
2.them
>>CORRECT!
3.her,me
>>CORRECT!4.himself
>>CORRECT!5.her
>>CORRECT!
Yesterday, I played in a swimming pool with my friend.
>>CORRECT!
>> Yesterday, I spent time playing in a swimming pool with my friend.
We were snorkeling.>>CORRECT!
>>OR: We enjoyed snorkeling.
Snokeling was fun.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: Snorkeling was interesting!But the water is dirty.
>>But the water was dirty.
>>OR: Snokeling was fun but the water was dirty.I thought that water is the most dirty.
>>I thought that was the dirtiest.So I feel bad,
>>So I felt bad.
Anyway, I had fun in there.
>>Anyway, I had fun there.
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