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2013-08-07 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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1.herself 2.them 3.her,me 4.himself 5.her Yesterday, I played in a swimming pool with my friend. We were snorkeling. Snokeling was fun But the water is dirty. I thought that water is the most dirty. So I feel bad,Anyway, I had fun in there

강사 첨삭

Hello, Tom! Whoa~ You really love the water. I am envious again T^T I can imagine how fun it is to play with your friend. Congratulations! You perfected your homework!! *clap* I am so proud of you!!^^ 1.herself >>CORRECT! 2.them >>CORRECT! 3.her,me >>CORRECT!4.himself >>CORRECT!5.her >>CORRECT! Yesterday, I played in a swimming pool with my friend. >>CORRECT! >> Yesterday, I spent time playing in a swimming pool with my friend. We were snorkeling.>>CORRECT! >>OR: We enjoyed snorkeling. Snokeling was fun. >>CORRECT! >>OR: Snorkeling was interesting!But the water is dirty. >>But the water was dirty. >>OR: Snokeling was fun but the water was dirty.I thought that water is the most dirty. >>I thought that was the dirtiest.So I feel bad, >>So I felt bad. Anyway, I had fun in there. >>Anyway, I had fun there.  

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