Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
"Can money buy happiness?"
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I don't think that money can buy happiness.
It is maybe because I have heard the saying "Money cannot buy happiness".
I have not had enough money to buy everything I want to have.
Frankly speaking, I don't know if money can buy happiness.
But It seems like that money cannot buy the person's mind as love.
I will be sad if money can buy happiness because I don't have enough money.
I am happy now although I don't have much money.
It is because I have very lovely family and friends.
Also I have a good job and I am healthy.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ma\'am [이름]! Money makes the world go around. It feeds us, clothes us and keeps the lights on and the gas tank filled. Haha! Money is awesome. Happiness is better. Have a good night! Sleep well.
-Teacher Chloe
\"Can money buy happiness?\"I don\'t think that money can buy happiness.
>>Correct!It is maybe because I have heard the saying \"Money cannot buy happiness\".
>>Correct!I have not had enough money to buy everything I want to have.
>>I don\'t have enough money to buy everything I want.
>>I don\'t have enough money to buy everything I want to have. Frankly speaking, I don\'t know if money can buy happiness.
>>Correct!
But It seems like that money cannot buy the person\'s mind as love.
>>It seems like money cannot buy happiness and love. I will be sad if money can buy happiness because I don\'t have enough money.
>>Correct! I am happy now although I don\'t have much money.
>>Correct!It is because I have very lovely family and friends.
>>It is because I have a very lovely family and friends. Also I have a good job and I am healthy.
>>Correct!
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