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2013-08-07 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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"Can money buy happiness?" -> I don't think that money can buy happiness. It is maybe because I have heard the saying "Money cannot buy happiness". I have not had enough money to buy everything I want to have. Frankly speaking, I don't know if money can buy happiness. But It seems like that money cannot buy the person's mind as love. I will be sad if money can buy happiness because I don't have enough money. I am happy now although I don't have much money. It is because I have very lovely family and friends. Also I have a good job and I am healthy.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ma\'am [이름]! Money makes the world go around. It feeds us, clothes us and keeps the lights on and the gas tank filled. Haha! Money is awesome. Happiness is better. Have a good night! Sleep well. -Teacher Chloe \"Can money buy happiness?\"I don\'t think that money can buy happiness. >>Correct!It is maybe because I have heard the saying \"Money cannot buy happiness\". >>Correct!I have not had enough money to buy everything I want to have. >>I don\'t have enough money to buy everything I want. >>I don\'t have enough money to buy everything I want to have.  Frankly speaking, I don\'t know if money can buy happiness. >>Correct! But It seems like that money cannot buy the person\'s mind as love. >>It seems like money cannot buy happiness and love. I will be sad if money can buy happiness because I don\'t have enough money. >>Correct! I am happy now although I don\'t have much money. >>Correct!It is because I have very lovely family and friends. >>It is because I have a very lovely family and friends. Also I have a good job and I am healthy. >>Correct!

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