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2013-08-08 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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I think the greatest reponsibility of a parent is love. Oneday, my mom said"All the parents and son must love each other." So, the love is the greatest reponsibility of sons and daughters too

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Hi, there! Thanks for doing your homework, Tom! I greatly appreciate it when you realize the love from your parents^^ They give us the most unconditional love no one could offer.~ Anyway, I would like you to work on articles like \"a/ an/ the\". Furthermore, please take note of your punctuation marks. That\'s all^^ I think the greatest reponsibility of a parent is love. >>CORRECT! >>OR: I think the most important responsibility of a parent is love. Oneday, my mom said\"All the parents and son must love each other.\" >> One day, my mom said, \"All parents and son must love one another.\" >> One day, my mom told me,  \"All parents and their children must love one another.\" >>NOTE: We use the \"each other\" if we are pertaining to two persons, however, we use \"one another\" if we talk about three or more people~ So, the love is the greatest reponsibility of sons and daughters too >>So, love is the greatest reponsibility of sons and daughters, too.

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