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I agree with its opinion. Face-to-face is more effective communication skill such as others. Because your opinion will be exactly delivered to your partners. Sometimes, we are difficutl to find what is exactly opinion when we use letters, email or phones. I gurantee it will be stressed you. To know exactly opinion from people, it's very important to communicate between each other. So, I suggest that if you can meet people anytime, it's better than use lettes, mail or phones.
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I agree with its opinion.
>> I agree with the statement.
Face-to-face is more effective communication skill such as others.
>> Face-to-face communication is more effective than the other types of communication.
Because your opinion will be exactly delivered to your partners.
>> It is because through this type of communication, your opinion will be exactly delivered to the person you are communicating with.
Sometimes, we are difficutl to find what is exactly opinion when we use letters, email or phones.
>> Sometimes, it is difficult to find out the exact message within if we use letters, email, or phones.
I gurantee it will be stressed you.
>> I guarantee that it will only stress you.
To know exactly opinion from people, it\'s very important to communicate between each other.
>> To know the exact opinion of people, it\'s more effective to communicate face-to-face.
So, I suggest that if you can meet people anytime, it\'s better than use lettes, mail or phones.
>> That\'s why, I suggest that it is better for people to have face-to-face communication than communicating throuhg letters, emails, or phones.
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