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Have you ever found a large amount of money on the street? If not, what would you do if you did?
If I will find the a lot of money on the street, I will buy the I-Pad.
>>If I found a lot a of money on the street, I will buy an iPad.
I always amby them which have a that specailly on the subway. because, I
enjoy the movie when I take a train.
>>I always envy those who have that specially on the subway because I enjoy watching movies when I take the train.
It is hard to see the movie
because the screen size is too small.
>>Correct!!
>> Or It is hard to watch the movie because the screen is too small.
And, I hope to use to have a conversation with my student throughout the
I-Pad.
>>And, I hope to use the iPad to have a conversation with my student.
I think my class is sometimes boiling. we need a different
something and I use the photo and movie on I-Pad when I explain
something for my student
>>I think my class is sometimes boring, we need something different. I use the iPad to show photos and/or movies when I explain something to my student.
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