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Hi, this is [이름]. I don't agree that most companies require English scores as a tool to evaluate candidates. I understand that the people in certain jobs really have to speak English fluently. But I heard from some of my friens that they hardly use their English abilities in their jobs. I think that it is easy for the companies to choose the one who will work for them accoring to their English scores among a lot of applicants. Becuase of the improper system, many students in Korea have been studying English since they were young. So they are not interested in other things which is not related to the employment such as cultures, histories and current events. Because they don't have time doing and considering other things. It causes that most people don't have distinct their individualities. That's why most of applicants have similar backgrounds and it makes companies feel difficult to evaluate them. It is a vicious circle. Thank you! :-)

Hello there [이름]!!! A pleasant Friday afternoon~~ I just so love your points here! They are very realistic and heartfelt. I guess you poured your heart out in this composition..kkk Just be very careful with your spellings next time! ;) Great Job!!! See you next Monday~~ T.Kristel Hi, this is [이름]. >> CORRECT!!I don\'t agree that most companies require English scores as a tool to evaluate candidates. >> CORRECT!!I understand that the people in certain jobs really have to speak English fluently. >> CORRECT!!But I heard from some of my friens that they hardly use their English abilities in their jobs. >> But I heard from some of my friends that they hardly use their English abilities in their jobs. I think that it is easy for the companies to choose the one who will work for them accoring to their English scores among a lot of applicants. >> I think that it is easier for the companies to choose the one who will work for them according to their English scores among a lot of applicants.Becuase of the improper system, many students in Korea have been studying English since they were young. >> Because of the improper system, many students in Korea have been studying English since they were young. So they are not interested in other things which is not related to the employment such as cultures, histories and current events. >> CORRECT!!Because they don\'t have time doing and considering other things. >> CORRECT!!It causes that most people don\'t have distinct their individualities. >> It causes most people not to have distinct individualities. That\'s why most of applicants have similar backgrounds and it makes companies feel difficult to evaluate them. >> That\'s why most applicants have similar backgrounds and it makes companies feel difficult to evaluate them. It is a vicious circle. >> CORRECT!!Thank you! :-) >> CORRECT!!