Homework

2013-08-09 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

학생이 쓴 원문

1. They used to live together, but now they live ____________. a part apart -> apart 2. I gave him ____________ of my inheritance. a part apart -> a part 3. That is an ____________ different problem. all together altogether -> altogether 4. They were sitting ____________ in the living room. altogether all together -> all together 5. I would be able to single out ____________ song of theirs that I like best. any one anyone -> any one Nowadays, I often feel low because I cannot exercise and the weather is so bad. Exaggeratedly speaking, I don't have energy to talk. I have not been able to exercise since my leg was broken. My physical strenth seems to get more weak. So I feel so tired even though I work a little. I am worried about how my strength get better. I had better start walking exercise.

강사 첨삭

Ma\'am Julia, let me share you what I\'ve read about depression. \"Depression drains your energy, hope, and drive, making it difficult to do what you need to feel better. But while overcoming depression isn't quick or easy, it's far from impossible. You can't beat it through sheer willpower, but you do have some control뾢ven if your depression is severe and stubbornly persistent. The key is to start small and build from there. Feeling better takes time, but you can get there if you make positive choices for yourself each day.\" I hope this would atleast help you to defeat depression. Just be POSITIVE Ma\'am! Turn to trusted friends and family members and try to keep up with social activities even if you don't feel like it. It feels more comfortable being around other people will make you feel less depressed. Enjoy your weekend Ma\'am. -Teacher Chloe 1. They used to live together, but now they live ____________.a partapart-> apart >>Correct!2. I gave him ____________ of my inheritance.a partapart-> a part >>Correct!3. That is an ____________ different problem.all togetheraltogether-> altogether >>Correct!4. They were sitting ____________ in the living room.altogetherall together-> all together >>Correct!5. I would be able to single out ____________ song of theirs that I like best.any oneanyone-> any one>>Correct!Nowadays, I often feel low because I cannot exercise and the weather is so bad. >>Nowadays, I often feel low because I cannot exercise. Also the weather is bad. Exaggeratedly speaking, I don\'t have energy to talk. >>Correct!I have not been able to exercise since my leg was broken. >>I couldn\'t exercise since my leg was broken. My physical strenth seems to get more weak. >>My physical strength seems to get weaker. >>My physical strength is getting weaker. So I feel so tired even though I work a little. >>Correct!I am worried about how my strength get better. >>I hope my strength will get better. I had better start walking exercise. >>I\'d better start to exercise, >>I\'d better start exercising.

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·