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2013-08-14 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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money is not the only measure of success in life. My mom said'The best rich man doesn't have a lot of muney.' There is love. there is grass. there is fun. There is more to important thing than muney.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Tom! Wow I am so happy your mom has imparted that knowledge^^ And I am so proud of you!! In your age, you already know life is not only about money~^^ Thanks, Tom! money is not the only measure of success in life. >>Money is not the only measure of success in life.My mom said\'The best rich man doesn\'t have a lot of muney.\' >>My mom said, \"The richest man doesn\'t have a lot of money\".There is love. >>Love exists.there is grass. >>Fields of grass are there.there is fun. >>Fun is present, too!There is more to important thing than muney. >>There are definitely more important things than money.  

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