homework
학생이 쓴 원문
money is not the only measure of success in life.
My mom said'The best rich man doesn't have a lot of muney.'
There is love.
there is grass.
there is fun.
There is more to important thing than muney.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Tom!
Wow I am so happy your mom has imparted that knowledge^^
And I am so proud of you!!
In your age, you already know life is not only about money~^^
Thanks, Tom!
money is not the only measure of success in life.
>>Money is not the only measure of success in life.My mom said\'The best rich man doesn\'t have a lot of muney.\'
>>My mom said, \"The richest man doesn\'t have a lot of money\".There is love.
>>Love exists.there is grass.
>>Fields of grass are there.there is fun.
>>Fun is present, too!There is more to important thing than muney.
>>There are definitely more important things than money.
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