homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1.has arrived
2.has melted
3.have prepared
4.has landed
5.have suggested
I live in Un San apartment.
It is near the ocean.
And it is near the city too.
I can see the view from the window.
But the wind blows strongly.
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Hi, my dear!!
How are you? I hope you are doing great~
How was your holiday?
I hope it was great^^
1.has arrived
>>CORRECT!2.has melted
>>CORRECT!3.have prepared
>>CORRECT!4.has landed
>>CORRECT!5.have suggested
>>CORRECT!I live in Un San apartment.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: I reside in Un San apartment.It is near the ocean.
>>CORRECT!And it is near the city too.
>>CORRECT!
>>It is near the ocean and the city.I can see the view from the window.
>>CORRECT!
>>I can see the beautiful view from my window.But the wind blows strongly.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: However, the wind blows strongly.
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