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2013-08-16 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

학생이 쓴 원문

1.has arrived 2.has melted 3.have prepared 4.has landed 5.have suggested I live in Un San apartment. It is near the ocean. And it is near the city too. I can see the view from the window. But the wind blows strongly.

강사 첨삭

Hi, my dear!! How are you? I hope you are doing great~ How was your holiday? I hope it was great^^ 1.has arrived >>CORRECT!2.has melted >>CORRECT!3.have prepared >>CORRECT!4.has landed >>CORRECT!5.have suggested >>CORRECT!I live in Un San apartment. >>CORRECT! >>OR: I reside in Un San apartment.It is near the ocean. >>CORRECT!And it is near the city too. >>CORRECT! >>It is near the ocean and the city.I can see the view from the window. >>CORRECT! >>I can see the beautiful view from my window.But the wind blows strongly. >>CORRECT! >>OR: However, the wind blows strongly.        

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