Homework

2013-08-19 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

학생이 쓴 원문

1. Can I ______ a suggestion? make do -> make 2. You need to ______ some more work. make do -> do 3.I hate ______ the housework. making doing -> doing 4. I hate ______ the beds. making doing -> making 5. I like ______ the cooking. making doing -> doing I want to remain my young face. So I pay attention to skin care and I try to use anti-aging cream. I often eat the foods having much collagen. Today, I got a pimple on my face and it bother me. :( After work, I just came home and I squeezed the pimple. I hope that the pimple will dispear fastly.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ma\'am Julia! Oh! Then stay young! Say goodbye to pimples! I know that you are taking good care of yourself so keep it up! Take a rest now Ma\'am to get rid of pimples. Haha! Rest well! Have a sound a sleep. Sweet dreams! -Teacher Chloe 1. Can I ______ a suggestion?makedo-> make >>Correct!2. You need to ______ some more work.makedo-> do >>Correct!3.I hate ______ the housework.makingdoing-> doing >>Correct!4. I hate ______ the beds.makingdoing-> making >>Correct!5. I like ______ the cooking.makingdoing-> doing>>Correct!I want to remain my young face. >>I want to maintain a young face. So I pay attention to skin care and I try to use anti-aging cream. >>Correct! I often eat the foods having much collagen. >>I often eat food with much collagen. Today, I got a pimple on my face and it bother me. :( >>Today, I got a pimple on my face and it bothers me. After work, I just came home and I squeezed the pimple. >>When I got home after work, I pricked my pimple. I hope that the pimple will dispear fastly. >>I hope that it will disappear quickly. >>I hope that it will quickly disappear.

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