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2013-08-22 · 첨삭 강사 Kay

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Choose from the following words: towel, dry, sand, tan, cooler. 1. Could you please pass me one of the bottles of water from the _cooler_? 2. I've got _sand_ in my shoes. I need to shake. 3. Hey you've already got a _tan_. Don't stay in the sun any longer, or you'll get sunburned. 4. Is that shirt wet or _dry_? 5. Hand me a _towel_. I need to dry off Ted, who is my best friend, has gone to Manila for his summer vacation. He wanted to get a license of scuba diving. He is really active and adventurous person I've ever known. However, the weather of Manila wasn't fine. Actually, the rainy season already has come to Philippine. I just hope that he come back in a whole skin.

강사 첨삭

Hey there!You did very good today.You got all 5 questions correctly!I\'m so proud of you.Keep it up and always take care! Thanks for sharing me about your friend Ted. Let\'s hope for this safety here^^t. JaneChoose from the following words: towel, dry, sand, tan, cooler.1. Could you please pass me one of the bottles of water from the _cooler_?>>CORRECT2. I\'ve got _sand_ in my shoes. I need to shake.>>CORRECT3. Hey you\'ve already got a _tan_. Don\'t stay in the sun any longer, or you\'ll get sunburned.>>CORRECT4. Is that shirt wet or _dry_?>>CORRECT5. Hand me a _towel_. I need to dry off>>CORRECTTed, who is my best friend, has gone to Manila for his summer vacation.>>CORRECT>>OR Ted, my best friend, has gone to Manila for the summer vacation.He wanted to get a license of scuba diving.>>He wanted to get a license for scuba diving.He is really active and adventurous person I\'ve ever known.>>He is really active and adventurous person. He is the most active and adventurous person I\'ve ever known.However, the weather of Manila wasn\'t fine.>>However, the weather in Manila wasn\'t fine.Actually, the rainy season already has come to Philippine.>>Actually, the rainy season already has come to the Philippines.I just hope that he come back in a whole skin.>>I just hope that he can come back safely.

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