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2013-08-22 · 첨삭 강사 Kay

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1. Do you send your products __abroad__? ( = to a foreign country) by courier 2. Most people use __couriers__ to ensure quick and efficient delivery. carriers 3. When will the books be ___delivered__? = When will I get the books? sent 4. I __dropped off__ your package at the post office three days ago. put 5. The item is in __fair__ ( = perfect) condition. mint Now, I usually buy something online. Because, I can't afford to go a shop or department store except the weekend. Shopping onlie is a very easy way to buy what I need. It's so convenient to seach and compare many items through the oline shopping sites. It's possible to buy at only home if I shop oline. It helps me save my time. However, it can put me up to buy too many items including what I don't need. Therefore, it's important to make and fix a shopping list properly.

강사 첨삭

 Hi there!You got 4 out of 5 today.It\'s still very good. Don\'t you worry about it.I know that you\'ll get better until you\'ll be at your best.Keep up the good work and always take care!t. Jane1. Do you send your products __abroad__? ( = to a foreign country)by courier>>CORRECT2. Most people use __couriers__ to ensure quick and efficient delivery.carriers>>CORRECT3. When will the books be ___delivered__? = When will I get the books?sent>>CORRECT4. I __dropped off__ your package at the post office three days ago.put>>CORRECT5. The item is in __fair__ ( = perfect) condition.mint>>The item is in _mint_  condition.Now, I usually buy something online.>>CORRECTBecause, I can\'t afford to go a shop or department store except the weekend.>>Because, I can\'t afford to go a shop or department store except during weekends.OR Because, I don\'t have time to go a shop or department store except the during the weekend.Shopping onlie is a very easy way to buy what I need.>>Shopping online is a very easy way to buy what I need.It\'s so convenient to seach and compare many items through the oline shopping sites.>>It\'s so convenient to search and compare many items through the online shopping sites.It\'s possible to buy at only home if I shop oline.>>It\'s possible to buy even when I\'m only at home if I shop online.It helps me save my time.>>CORRECTHowever, it can put me up to buy too many items including what I don\'t need.>>However, it can convince me up to buy too many items including the ones I don\'t need.Therefore, it\'s important to make and fix a shopping list properly. >>CORRECTOR Therefore, it\'s important to make and fix a shopping list beforehand.

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