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2013-08-26 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

학생이 쓴 원문

1.carefully 2.slowly 3.perfectly 4.angryly 5.loudly 6.badly 7.nicely 8.goodly 9.quietly 10.easely My trip was very fun! i went to the temple. And I saw the golden Buddha statue. I played at the river.I also went to the international garden festival. I watched "The Big-O show"

강사 첨삭

Hello, Tom!! Long time no see~ I was really happy when I heard your voice and saw you^^ I missed you so much, my student~!! 1.carefully >>CORRECT!2.slowly >>CORRECT!3.perfectly >>CORRECT!4..angryly >>angrily5.loudly >>CORRECT!6.badly >>CORRECT!7.nicely >>CORRECT!8.goodly >>well9.quietly >>CORRECT!10.easely >>easily My trip was very fun! >>My trip was fun!i went to the temple. >>I went to the temple.And I saw the golden Buddha statue. >>CORRECT!I played at the river.I also went to the international garden festival. >>I played at the river and I also went to the International Garden Festival.I watched \"The Big-O show\" >> To cap it off, I also watched the  \"The Big-O Show\".

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