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2013-08-27 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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Most people thought that Michael, an ①eligible bachelor, was an 1)adorable, ②personable man. Mattie, however, found him 2)detestable. Some time ago, Michael promised to take Mattie to a ③fashionable restaurant for a ④remarkable dinner. As ⑤horrible as it sounds, Michael took Mattie to the local McDonald's. Most of the food there was either ⑥inedible or ⑦undigestible. Mattie was as 3)irritable as ⑧possible when she told her roommates about her 4)terrible date. "Whoever finally marries that ⑨contemptible Michael," Mattie said, "is certainly not going to be in an 5)enviable position." - Essay - ①~⑨ : I corrected the words. 1)~5) : Those words are correct originally. I love it to do this kinds of homework. I think my weakness in English is about the vocabulary. This homework is very fun and useful for me. I'd like to appreciate not only your comment, but also giving this homework.

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Hello there^^ Thanks for your time in this. I also appreciate you for being participative and showing much interests in our class discussions. Thank you so much and see you in class^^ TEACHER ROSE   Most people thought that Michael, an ①eligible bachelor, was an 1)adorable, ②personable man. Mattie, however, found him 2)detestable. >>CorrectSome time ago, Michael promised to take Mattie to a ③fashionable restaurant for a ④remarkable dinner. As ⑤horrible as it sounds, Michael took Mattie to the local McDonald\'s. Most of the food there was either ⑥inedible or ⑦undigestible. >>CorrectMattie was as 3)irritable as ⑧possible when she told her roommates about her 4)terrible date. \"Whoever finally marries that ⑨contemptible Michael,\" Mattie said, \"is certainly not going to be in an 5)enviable position.\">>Correct- Essay -①~⑨ : I corrected the words. >>Correct1)~5) : Those words are correct originally.>>Numbers 1 to five, those words are originally correct.I love it to do this kinds of homework.>>I love to do these kinds of homework.I think my weakness in English is about the vocabulary.>>CorrectThis homework is very fun and useful for me.>> This homework is very fun and useful to me.I\'d like to appreciate not only your comment, but also giving this homework. >>I\'d like to appreciate not only your comments to me but also for giving for giving me homework.

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