Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. This ingredient will bring a lot of (flavor) to this dish.
2. Food from other countries is (still) sometimes called (ethnic) food.
3. You don't have to combine this food with anything. It's delicious on its (own).
4. How long do I have to (steep) this tea?
5. My doctor told me to cut down on junk food, and to eat (nourishing) food instead.
- Essay -
I'm not good at cook. On the other hand, my older brother is good at cook.
He always cook for me when my parents go out. So, I thank to him and envy him.
However, I finally found out that I don't have talent to cook when I was 20 years old.
Instead, I started to find a famous restaurants to enjoy a taste of food.
There are so many famous and unique restaurants in Seoul.
강사 첨삭
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1. This ingredient will bring a lot of (flavor) to this dish. >>Correct2. Food from other countries is (still) sometimes called (ethnic) food. >>Correct3. You don\'t have to combine this food with anything. It\'s delicious on its (own). >>Correct4. How long do I have to (steep) this tea? >>Correct5. My doctor told me to cut down on junk food, and to eat (nourishing) food instead.>>Correct- Essay -I\'m not good at cook.
>>I\'m not good at cooking.
On the other hand, my older brother is good at cook.>>On the other hand, my older brother is good at cooking.He always cook for me when my parents go out.
>>He always cooks for me when my parents go out.
So, I thank to him and envy him.>>So, I thank him and I envy him.However, I finally found out that I don\'t have talent to cook when I was 20 years old.>> Better: However, I finally found out that I don\'t have talent in cooking when I became 20 years old.Instead, I started to find a famous restaurants to enjoy a taste of food.
>>Instead, I started to find out famous restaurants to enjoy tasting foods.There are so many famous and unique restaurants in Seoul. >> Correct
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