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2013-08-28 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello!! Teacher Nina!! ^^ I want to see you during vacation. My mom said"If teacher Nina don't have another student, my son will have a class with teacher Nina" My and her efforts were reward. We meet again. What did you do during vacation? I had a trip and I'm the main character in my team.So I'm busy now. But ,maybe ,my English skill is little bad. Because I was half asleep and half awake all day. Help me!About my English skill! I,m exercise. the homework is too hard. Please explain to me.

강사 첨삭

Happy Wednesday Tom^^   I missed you! Wow! I am so happy that I was able to receive a message from you today. I am excited to see you in class! I was really hoping that you will be my student again. Thank you! Oh! Don\'t worry about your English skills! I am here to help you! We will work hard together. You can do it! Can\'t wait to talk to you. **** The question is asking about your opinion: Which is more important for you is it the physical appearance or the personality of a person? = Physical appearance is all the looks, how he/she dress up. = Personality is the attitude of a person. Hello!! Teacher Nina!! ^^ >> Correct! I want to see you during vacation. >> Correct! >> OR: I want to see you during my vacation. My mom said\"If teacher Nina don\'t have another student, my son will have a class with teacher Nina\" >> My mom said \"If teacher Nina doesn\'t have another student, my son will have the class with teacher Nina\"My and her efforts were reward. >> My and my mom\'s efforts were rewarded. >> OR; Our efforts were rewarded.We meet again. >> We will meet again. What did you do during vacation? >> Correct! >> OR: What made you busy during vacation? I had a trip and I\'m the main character in my team. >> I went on a trip and I was the leader in my team. So I\'m busy now. >> Correct! But ,maybe ,my English skill is little bad. >> Did you mean: But I think my English skills became bad.Because I was half asleep and half awake all day. >> Correct! >> OR: Because I was asleep in the evening and awake all day.Help me! About my English skill! >> Please help me with my English skills. I,m exercise. the homework is too hard. >> I exercised and the homework is too hard for me.Please explain to me. >> Please explain the homework to me. >> OR: Please give me some explanations.

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