homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello!! Teacher Nina!! ^^
I want to see you during vacation.
My mom said"If teacher Nina don't have another student, my son will have a class with teacher Nina"
My and her efforts were reward.
We meet again.
What did you do during vacation?
I had a trip and I'm the main character in my team.So I'm busy now.
But ,maybe ,my English skill is little bad.
Because I was half asleep and half awake all day.
Help me!About my English skill! I,m exercise. the homework is too hard.
Please explain to me.
강사 첨삭
Happy Wednesday Tom^^
I missed you! Wow! I am so happy that I was able to receive a message from you today.
I am excited to see you in class! I was really hoping that you will be my student again.
Thank you! Oh! Don\'t worry about your English skills! I am here to help you!
We will work hard together. You can do it! Can\'t wait to talk to you.
**** The question is asking about your opinion: Which is more important for you is it the physical appearance or the personality of a person?
= Physical appearance is all the looks, how he/she dress up.
= Personality is the attitude of a person.
Hello!! Teacher Nina!! ^^
>> Correct! I want to see you during vacation.
>> Correct!
>> OR: I want to see you during my vacation. My mom said\"If teacher Nina don\'t have another student, my son will have a class with teacher Nina\"
>> My mom said \"If teacher Nina doesn\'t have another student, my son will have the class with teacher Nina\"My and her efforts were reward.
>> My and my mom\'s efforts were rewarded.
>> OR; Our efforts were rewarded.We meet again.
>> We will meet again. What did you do during vacation?
>> Correct!
>> OR: What made you busy during vacation? I had a trip and I\'m the main character in my team.
>> I went on a trip and I was the leader in my team.
So I\'m busy now.
>> Correct! But ,maybe ,my English skill is little bad.
>> Did you mean: But I think my English skills became bad.Because I was half asleep and half awake all day.
>> Correct!
>> OR: Because I was asleep in the evening and awake all day.Help me! About my English skill!
>> Please help me with my English skills.
I,m exercise. the homework is too hard.
>> I exercised and the homework is too hard for me.Please explain to me.
>> Please explain the homework to me.
>> OR: Please give me some explanations.
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