Homework

Hello teacher. I did the homework today. I will do the homework what you gave me yesterday next time. Please check my answer about your question below. What is the most important thing for choosing a job? The salary is important to choose a job. First of all, the salary reflect the value of a employee. Second, money decide one's life qulity. If I am poor, it has restriction to live such as eating, waering, meeting and others. Therefore I will choose the company where give more money. Actually I am really confuse while I write down becaus All of them is important to get a job. That is why modify repeatly. It will be wonderful life, If I can work at the perfect company with good co-workers where is qulified high salary, good employee benefits and closer location from my house. But it is not reality. Suddenly I want to change my job! It has not any condition what I write in this essay. Anyway, I always thank you for the class. See you next class.

Colorful Thursday morning to you Ms. [Name] [이름]! Wow, you did an excellent work today. That was long enough for me to read! haha Just kidding. ^^Anyway, I do appreciate every class that we have and that you are having your class with me. Thank you very much.   And with regards to your homework, you did great in explaining your side and on what you have chose. How I wish that there is a perfect company with a high salary, good co-workers and just near my house too. But as what you have mentioned, that is just a dream and there is no such thing in reality.   Be careful next time with the use of prepositions and capitalization. Sometimes you tend to capitalize unnecessary words. Just be aware next time.   I will see you again later! Have a great day ahead of you! Take care!   Always, Kathrine     Hello teacher. >> CORRECTI did the homework today. >> CORRECT I will do the homework what you gave me yesterday next time. >> I will do next time the homework which you have given me yesterday. Please check my answer about your question below.>> CORRECT What is the most important thing for choosing a job?The salary is important to choose a job. >> CORRECT >> OR: The salary is the most important when choosing a job. First of all, the salary reflect the value of a employee. >> First of all, the salary reflects the value of an employee. Second, money decide one\'s life qulity. >> Second, money decides one\'s life quality. If I am poor, it has restriction to live such as eating,  waering, meeting and others. >> If I am poor then it has restrictions in everything that I need to live such as food, clothing, meeting other people and others. Therefore I will choose the company where give more money. >> Therefore I will choose the company which gives more money. Actually I am really confuse while I write down becaus All of them is important to get a job. >> Actually, I was really confused while I was writing it down because all of them are important when choosing a job. That is why modify repeatly. >> That is why I modify my answer repeatedly. It will be wonderful life, If I can work at the perfect company with good co-workers where is qulified high salary, good employee benefits and closer location from my house. >> It will be a wonderful life if I can work in a  perfect comapny with good co-workers, a high salary, good employees benefits and one which has a close location to my house. But it is not reality. >> But it is not the reality. Suddenly I want to change my job! >> CORRECT  It has not any condition what I write in this essay.>> It has no any condition on what I write in this essay. Anyway, I always thank you for the class. >> CORRECT See you next class. >> CORRECT