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What are you most proud of in your working life?
"My work is only for students. That is the most proud for me"
Since I worked for part-time job in 2009 I work after a long time
I’m not good at work so make some mistakes.
If I define my work in only one word that is office job, simple repeat work
For example sending a message to their parents or typing scores
As long as I do not complain my work is so easy
In my case I want to get a job that I can contribute to other people ‘life
Now as a staff in English academy I have been helping many students
Even though my work is so hard, that is the reason that I can enjoy there.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon [이름]!
The people who get promoted are those who make a difference. If there is no difference between what happens when you come to work and when you don\'t, why would anyone want to pay you?^___^v
One simple way to make a difference is to do any job you tackle the best it can be done. That is what taking ownership means. You may not be the best choice for a particular job, but once it is given to you it is up to you to get it done the best way possible.
If you do that, people will notice. And when they see you take ownership of every job you do, they will start to give you the jobs that are important to them. The more you do jobs that matter to your superiors, and do them well, the faster you will move ahead.
Always,
~Aimee^^
>> Correct
\"My work is only for students.
>> \"My work is catering to students needs.
That is the most proud for me\"
>> That i what I am most proud of.\"
Since I worked for part-time job in 2009 I work after a long time
Since I worked for part-time job in 2009 I work after a long time
>> It has been a long time since I worked. The last time I worked was when I had a part time job in 2009.
I’m not good at work so make some mistakes.
>> I\'m not good at work that is why I make a lot of mistakes.
If I define my work in only one word that is office job, simple repeat work
I’m not good at work so make some mistakes.
>> I\'m not good at work that is why I make a lot of mistakes.
If I define my work in only one word that is office job, simple repeat work
>> If I am going to define my work in just one word that would be simple.
For example sending a message to their parents or typing scores
For example sending a message to their parents or typing scores
>> An example of what I do is to send messages to the students\' parents or recording scores.
As long as I do not complain my work is so easy
>> As long as I don\'t complain about my work, it is so easy.
In my case I want to get a job that I can contribute to other people ‘life
As long as I do not complain my work is so easy
>> As long as I don\'t complain about my work, it is so easy.
In my case I want to get a job that I can contribute to other people ‘life
>> In my case, i want a job that can contribute to other people\'s lives.
Now as a staff in English academy I have been helping many students
>> Now, as a staff in an English Academy, I have been helping many students.
Even though my work is so hard, that is the reason that I can enjoy there.
Even though my work is so hard, that is the reason that I can enjoy there.
>> Even if my work is so hard, it is the reason why I enjoy it.
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