homework

I think personality is more important. Because,if some person is handsome,but he is not kind,people don't recognize. That is to say,bad person can't success. So,if you want a cucceed,be kind to other. And be a personality person.

Hello there Tom! Happy Thursday! I am so glad that you were able to express your ideas in a good way. Awesome job! You used a lot of words to express your ideas clearly. Keep it up! Please go over the corrections, I provided for you. Keep on writing! I love reading your essay ^-^ See you in class! Teacher Nina I think personality is more important. >> Correct! >> OR: I think a person\'s personality is more important. Because,if some person is handsome,but he is not kind,people don\'t recognize. >> Because if a person is handsome, but he is not kind people don\'t recognize him.That is to say,bad person can\'t success. >> It means that a bad person can\'t be successful. >> OR: It means to say that a bad person can\'t be really successful.So,if you want a cucceed,be kind to other. >> So if you want to succeed, be kind to others. >> OR: If you want to have a successful life, be good to others.And be a personality person. >> And be a person with good personality. >> OR: Be a person with a good attitude,