Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello Teacher.
It sill be hot and humid today.
I will go to the esthetic shop. My face skin has many trouble, because the weather!! It is awful. I hate this summer. Please pray that my skin returns to original situation. Have a good night and see you tommorow.
Q1 - You may/might leave if you've finished.
Q2 - Can/May I come in?
Q3 - We could not get into the concert without tickets, so we went home.
Q4 - Could I open the window?
Q5 - Could you turn the heating up a bit, please?
Q6 - You can't take a mobile phone into the exam.
Q7 - Can/Could you help me?
Q8 - I'm afraid you may not take the exam until you pay for it.
Q9 - You cannot smoke anywhere on the train.
Q10 - You can use my dictionary if you want.
강사 첨삭
A great evening to you Ms. [Name] [이름]!
Thanks for doing your homework. ^^
You almost perfected it. Nonetheless, you did a good job.
Please review the corrections I have written below.
Anyway, I really wish you luck than your skin will back to it\'s natural texture. haha.
A big luck on you! :0)
And don\'t you worry because summer is going to end already so the weather will be good after.
So smile and don\'t let the bad weather ruin your beautiful face.
It will just add wrinkles. You see?
Pretty sure of that.
So smile!
I\'ll see you tomorrow!
Good night!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Hello Teacher.
>> CORRECTIt sill be hot and humid today.
>> It\'s still hot and humid today. I will go to the esthetic shop.
>> CORRECT
My face skin has many trouble, because the weather!! >> My skin in my face has many trouble because of the weather!!!
It is awful.
>> CORRECT
I hate this summer.
>> CORRECT
Please pray that my skin returns to original situation.
>> Please pray that my skin will return to it\'s original texture.
Have a good night and see you tommorow.>> Have a good night and see you tomorrow. Q1 - You may/might leave if you\'ve finished.
>> CORRECT
Q2 - Can/May I come in?
>> CORRECT
Q3 - We could not get into the concert without tickets, so we went home.
>> CORRECTQ4 - Could I open the window?
>> Either could be used here. Q5 - Could you turn the heating up a bit, please?
>> CORRECTQ6 - You can\'t take a mobile phone into the exam.
>> Either could be used here. Q7 - Can/Could you help me?
>> CORRECTQ8 - I\'m afraid you may not take the exam until you pay for it.
>> CORRECTQ9 - You cannot smoke anywhere on the train.
>> CORRECTQ10 - You can use my dictionary if you want.
>> CORRECT
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