Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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There were just some minor corrections but your performance is improving.
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1. People in Israel are
->b. Israeli
>>CORRECT
2. People from Israel speak
->c. Hebrew
>>CORRECT
3. People in Hong Kong speak English and
->c. Mandarin
>>b. Cantonese
4. People in Macau speak Cantonese and
->c. Portugese
>>CORRECT
5. People from Ireland are
->a. Irish
>>CORRECT
I went to Itaewon with my boyfriend.
>>I went out with my boyfriend yesterday.
We could visit the Craftworks where we wanted to go but we could not because there was not any available seat.
>> The other night, we went to the Craftsworks but the place was so full and there were no seats available at that time.
Yesterday, we went there earlier than before.
>> So yesterday, we went there earlier.
Craftworks is famous for craft beer. I visited there for the first time.
>> Craftworks is very famous for their craft beer and it\'s my first time to go there.
My boyfriend have been there.
>> But my boyfriend have been there several times.
Beers in the pub tasted good.
>>Beers served in the pub taste good.
The names of beers are named after Korean\'s famous mountains.
>>The beers were named after the Korean\'s famous mountains.
I drank Jirisan and Namsan beers.
>>I ordered Jirisan and Namsan beers.
I like Mountain Jiri very much so I first drank Jirisan beer.
>>I first drank the Jirisan beer since I like the Mountain Jiri very much.
It has high alcole so I drank slowly.
>> Beers contain a high percentage of alcohol so, I drink [drank-past] moderately.^^
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