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2013-09-02 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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1. Eight dollars (are) the price of a movie these days. 2. (Are) the tweezers in this drawer? 3. Your pants (are) at the cleaner's. 4. There (were) fifteen candies in that bag. Now there (is) only one left! 5. The committee (debates) these questions carefully. - Essay - (About My dream) I want to be the most successful business man. My Business has a huge impact all over the world. I want to have the tallest building which has a fine view. Besides, I want to have a seaside villa or mountain cabin in order to visit there when I want take a rest.

강사 첨삭

Hello, there^^ I am so happy you are dreaming to earn a whopping 10 million before you retire^^ Cheer on^^ See you in our class and have a great day^^ 1. Eight dollars (are) the price of a movie these days.>>is2. (Are) the tweezers in this drawer?>>CORRECT!3. Your pants (are) at the cleaner\'s.>>CORRECT!4. There (were) fifteen candies in that bag. Now there (is) only one left!>>CORRECT!5. The committee (debates) these questions carefully.>>CORRECT!- Essay ->>CORRECT!(About My dream)>>CORRECT!I want to be the most successful business man.>>CORRECT!My Business has a huge impact all over the world.>>I hope to establish a business which has a huge impact all over the world.I want to have the tallest building which has a fine view.>>CORRECT!Besides, I want to have a seaside villa or mountain cabin in order to visit there when I want take a rest. >>Besides, I want to have a seaside villa or a mountain cabin for when I want to take a rest.

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