Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. My sister Jane loves books. This novel is for (her) .
2. My children like Disney films. The video is for (them) .
3. My brother Matt collects picture postcards. These postcards are for (him) .
4. My parents like Latin music. The CD is for (them) .
5. I like watches. This nice watch is for (me).
- Essay -
I like flying. So far, I flew only once but I couldn't forget the feeling when I flew.
It's more comportable to board a plane than I expected.
Besides, the served airline food was more delicious than I expected also.
Especially, I could use the multi-media system in a plane such as watcing a movie or listening to music.
If I have a chance to get a plane again, I will use Korea air that is so popular airline in Korea.
강사 첨삭
Hi, there^^
I really love reading and checking your essays over^^
They are able to radiate some sense of excitement- especially sharing your dreams as well as experiences *_*
1. My sister Jane loves books. This novel is for (her) .
>>CORRECT!2. My children like Disney films. The video is for (them) . >>CORRECT!
3. My brother Matt collects picture postcards. These postcards are for (him) . >>CORRECT!
4. My parents like Latin music. The CD is for (them) . >>CORRECT!
5. I like watches. This nice watch is for (me).
>>CORRECT!
I like flying.
>>CORRECT!
So far, I flew only once but I couldn\'t forget the feeling when I flew.>>CORRECT!
It\'s more comportable to board a plane than I expected.>>It\'s more comfortable to board a plane than I expected.
Besides, the served airline food was more delicious than I expected also.
>>Besides, the plane food was more delicious than I had ever imagined.
Especially, I could use the multi-media system in a plane such as watcing a movie or listening to music.
>>Especially, I could use the multimedia system in a plane such as watching a movie or listening to music.If I have a chance to get a plane again, I will use Korea air that is so popular airline in Korea.
>>If I have a chance to board a plane again, I will fly through Korea Air that is so popular here in our country.
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