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2013-09-02 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

학생이 쓴 원문

1. My sister Jane loves books. This novel is for (her) . 2. My children like Disney films. The video is for (them) . 3. My brother Matt collects picture postcards. These postcards are for (him) . 4. My parents like Latin music. The CD is for (them) . 5. I like watches. This nice watch is for (me). - Essay - I like flying. So far, I flew only once but I couldn't forget the feeling when I flew. It's more comportable to board a plane than I expected. Besides, the served airline food was more delicious than I expected also. Especially, I could use the multi-media system in a plane such as watcing a movie or listening to music. If I have a chance to get a plane again, I will use Korea air that is so popular airline in Korea.

강사 첨삭

Hi, there^^ I really love reading and checking your essays over^^ They are able to radiate some sense of excitement- especially sharing your dreams as well as experiences *_* 1. My sister Jane loves books. This novel is for (her) . >>CORRECT!2. My children like Disney films. The video is for (them) . >>CORRECT! 3. My brother Matt collects picture postcards. These postcards are for (him) . >>CORRECT! 4. My parents like Latin music. The CD is for (them) . >>CORRECT! 5. I like watches. This nice watch is for (me). >>CORRECT! I like flying. >>CORRECT!  So far, I flew only once but I couldn\'t forget the feeling when I flew.>>CORRECT! It\'s more comportable to board a plane than I expected.>>It\'s more comfortable to board a plane than I expected. Besides, the served airline food was more delicious than I expected also. >>Besides, the plane food was more delicious than I had ever imagined. Especially, I could use the multi-media system in a plane such as watcing a movie or listening to music. >>Especially, I could use the multimedia system in a plane such as watching a movie or listening to music.If I have a chance to get a plane again, I will use Korea air that is so popular airline in Korea. >>If I have a chance to board a plane again, I will fly through Korea Air that is so popular here in our country.

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