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2013-09-02 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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1.did 2.study 3.didn't 4.Did 5.were These day,my theater group have a practice for the English play,I feel very hard,but it is very fun. My school group dramatize "Les Miserables"and Japanese drama"Queen's Classroom". And I'm a main character of my group. I want to my school will be the first place winner!!^^

강사 첨삭

Hello Tom^^ Happy first Monday of the month! I am sure that your school will win. ^^ Wow! I am so proud of you! I know that you will do your part very well. Just always give your best shot okay? I like the movie \"Les Miserables\". ^^ It\'s one of my favorite movie. How about you? Can you tell me about your favorite movie in class! See you! Teacher Nina 1.did >> Correct! 2.study >> studied 3.didn\'t >> Correct! 4.Did >> Correct! 5.were>> Correct! These day,my theater group have a practice for the English play,I feel very hard,but it is very fun. >> These days, my theater group are practicing for the English play, I find it very hard but is fun, >> OR: These days, my group are practicing for the English play, it\'s difficult for me but it\'s also fun. My school group dramatize \"Les Miserables\"and Japanese drama\"Queen\'s Classroom\". >> The group in my school will dramatize \"Les Miserables\"and a Japanese drama titled \"Queen\'s Classroom\". >> OR: The group is going to act the story \"Les Miserables\"and a Japanese drama titled \"Queen\'s Classroom\".And I\'m a main character of my group. >> I will act as the main character of my group. >> OR: I\'m will portray the main character in the story.I want to my school will be the first place winner!!^^ >> I want my school to get the first place in the contest. >> OR: I want my school to win.

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