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If I can put a computer chip in my brain, I would like to get The ability to speak 5 languages. Because I really like studying foreign language and making foreign freinds.
I can speak Chinese, English now and I studied Russian a little bit.
Maybe I majored in International commerce and area studies, so I wanted to speak many languges.
now I am working at German-Korea investment Group, I have a plan to study German later.
If you are in this situation, what would you like to get?
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Great job for tonight!:))
Thank you for sharing your insight.
Well, we have the same answer.
I took up English Language as my major.
Learning different languages has been part of my course
and I am very much interested in learning
various language but I only know a few language though.~kkk
I can speak a little Arabic and Korean.:)
Anyway, keep up the good job.
I\'ll see you tomorrow!
:))
Belle=)
If I can put a computer chip in my brain, I would like to get The ability to speak 5 languages. Because I really like studying foreign language and making foreign freinds.
>>If I can put a computer chip in my brain, I would like to get the ability to speak 5 languages because I really like studying foreign languages and making friends with foreigners.
I can speak Chinese, English now and I studied Russian a little bit.>>I can speak Chinese, English and I studied a little bit of Russian.
Maybe I majored in International commerce and area studies, so I wanted to speak many languges.
>>I took up International Commerce,so, I think that\'s why I wanted to speak many languages.now I am working at German-Korea investment Group, I have a plan to study German later.
>>Now, I am working at German-Korean Investment Group. I have a plan to study German later on.
>>OR:Now, I am working at German-Korean Investment Group. I am planning to study German soon.If you are in this situation, what would you like to get?
>>correct
>>OR:If you are in this situation, what would you like to choose?
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