Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello. Ms. [Name].
I am a lazy student. Y.Y
It is a homework from last Thursday.
Q : From the time you started your work, what things have been changed?
I was a woman who do everything carefuly and who have cofidence.
But now, my [이름]d is always urgent without confidence.
I think that my job is very different from my major.
If can I return to my high school, I will change my majoy of university.
When I was high school student, I loved biology. So I choose department of molecular biology.
But I realized that my major is not of help get a good job.
If I stidied about business ad[이름]istration or economics, It will be in Good company and get a more suituble job.
I am not satisfied with my job now. That's why I am reading to change my job.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Ms. [Name] [이름]!
Oh my God! It\'s a very late homework!
I\'m going to die!
hahahaha.
Anyway, you can skip you homework last week and start with the homework I am giving this week.
So that you can concentrate on it. Okay? It\'s okay for me if you skip it.
I\'ll see you tomorrow!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Hello. Ms. [Name].
>> Hello Ms. [Name] am a lazy student. Y.Y
>> CORRECTIt is a homework from last Thursday.>> It is the homewrk from last Thursday.
Q : From the time you started your work, what things have been changed?I was a woman who do everything carefuly and who have cofidence.
>> I am a woman who does things carefully and who has confidence. But now, my [이름]d is always urgent without confidence.>> But now my [이름]d is thinking a lot and doing things without confidence. I think that my job is very different from my major.
>> CORRECTIf can I return to my high school, I will change my majoy of university.
>> If I can go back to the university, I wil change my major. When I was high school student, I loved biology.
>> When I was a high school stduent, I love biology.
So I choose department of molecular biology.
>> So I chose the department of molecular science. But I realized that my major is not of help get a good job.
>> But I reliazed that my major will not help me to get a job. If I stidied about business ad[이름]istration or economics, It will be in Good company and get a more suituble job.
>> If I will study about business ad[이름]istration or ecomonics, I will be in a good company and I will get a suitable job. I am not satisfied with my job now. >> CORRECT
That\'s why I am reading to change my job.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: That is why I am studying to change my job.
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