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2013-09-03 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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Hello. Ms. [Name]. I am a lazy student. Y.Y It is a homework from last Thursday. Q : From the time you started your work, what things have been changed? I was a woman who do everything carefuly and who have cofidence. But now, my [이름]d is always urgent without confidence. I think that my job is very different from my major. If can I return to my high school, I will change my majoy of university. When I was high school student, I loved biology. So I choose department of molecular biology. But I realized that my major is not of help get a good job. If I stidied about business ad[이름]istration or economics, It will be in Good company and get a more suituble job. I am not satisfied with my job now. That's why I am reading to change my job.

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Hi there Ms. [Name] [이름]! Oh my God! It\'s a very late homework! I\'m going to die! hahahaha. Anyway, you can skip you homework last week and start with the homework I am giving this week. So that you can concentrate on it. Okay? It\'s okay for me if you skip it. I\'ll see you tomorrow!   Always, Kathrine ^^ Hello. Ms. [Name]. >> Hello Ms. [Name] am a lazy student. Y.Y >> CORRECTIt is a homework from last Thursday.>> It is the homewrk from last Thursday. Q : From the time you started your work, what things have been changed?I was a woman who do everything carefuly and who have cofidence. >> I am a woman who does things carefully and who has confidence. But now, my [이름]d is always urgent without confidence.>> But now my [이름]d is thinking a lot and doing things without confidence. I think that my job is very different from my major. >> CORRECTIf can I return to my high school, I will change my majoy of university. >> If I can go back to the university, I wil change my major. When I was high school student, I loved biology. >> When I was a high school stduent, I love biology. So I choose department of molecular biology. >> So I chose the department of molecular science. But I realized that my major is not of help get a good job. >>  But I reliazed that my major will not help me to get  a job. If I stidied about business ad[이름]istration or economics, It will be in Good company and get a more suituble job. >> If I will study about business ad[이름]istration or ecomonics, I will be in a good company and I will get a  suitable job. I am not satisfied with my job now. >> CORRECT That\'s why I am reading to change my job. >> CORRECT >> OR: That is why I am studying to change my job.

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