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2013-09-04 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

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If you could change one thing about your appearance, what would it be? I want to change my leg. Because, my leg is a little bend. When I wear the short pens in the summer, the legs bother me whoever see. Of course, no one see my legs. A few years ago, I red the writing to fix the bended legs by bone on the newspaper.At that time, I willy want to go there to change my bone of leg, but I had a enough money to fix. Nowadays, I red the accident of the surgical procedure about treatment of bend leg.

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Hi there sir Dima^^. I\'m sorry about our class earlier!! Anyway, thanks for doing your homework even though you have a busy schedule!! I made some correction, please try to review it if you have time. By the way, What do you mean by bend leg? Tell more about that in our class! Have a great day then, bye!! ~T.Chelsea If you could change one thing about your appearance, what would it be? I want to change my leg. Because, my leg is a little bend. >>I want to cange my leg because my legs is a little bend. When I wear the short pens in the summer, the legs bother me whoever see. Of course, no one see my legs.>>Whenever I wear short pants in summer, my legs bither me if anyone will seee it. Of coarse nobody can see my legs.A few years ago, I red the writing to fix the bended legs by bone on the newspaper.At that time, I willy want to go there to change my bone of leg, but I had a enough money to fix. >>A few years ago, I read an article about how to fix a bended legs on the newspaper. At that time I really want to go there to fix my leg but I don\'t have enough money to fix it.Nowadays, I red the accident of the surgical procedure about treatment of bend leg. >>Nowadays, I read about an accident of a surgical procedure about the treatment of a bended leg.

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