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2013-09-04 · 첨삭 강사 Giselle

학생이 쓴 원문

1. This is [Name]. (He's) a good student. (His) marks are great. 2. Is this your book? No, it's (his). 3. He got a new bike. It's red. I'd like to have one like (his). 4. Mary has got a brother. (His) name is Paul. 5. (He's) very nice. (He's) always ready to help us when we need.

강사 첨삭

Hello there! You did a great job on your homework and you even got a perfect score.^^

You are really improving everyday, so keep it up!

Here are the corrections.Have a great day ahead!

1. This is [Name]. (He\'s) a good student. (His) marks are great.

>>CORRECT
2. Is this your book? No, it\'s (his).

>>CORRECT
3. He got a new bike. It\'s red. I\'d like to have one like (his).

>>CORRECT
4. Mary has got a brother. (His) name is Paul.

>>CORRECT
5. (He\'s) very nice. (He\'s) always ready to help us when we need.

>>CORRECT

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