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2013-09-04 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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Good afternoon Ms. [Name]. I agree your opinion that I need to challenge to use various words and I take a lot of practice the pronunciation. I should try to spend more time to study English. If I will, I should reduce the time to watch TV. Good bye~ Lovely TV! Y.Y Anyway, I always thanks for your teaching. Please check my answer below and see you tommorow. 1. I have no idea where she is. 2. Could you tell me where is she gone? 3. I asked them where they were going. 4. Can you tell me how much will it cost? 5. Do you have any idea how long is it take me to do it? 6. Has she told you whether will she help? 7. Can you explain why is it so expensive? 8. She asked me where I come from. 9. I was wondering why we don't take the train; it'll be quicker. 10. Can you remember what she said?

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A great afternoon to you Ms. [Name] [이름]! No kidding?  If you will do what you have said here, I think you will be really good. hahahaha... kkkkk And oh my Gooooodddd!!! Lovely TV? Really? You called your TV lovely? I think you really need to lesson the hours that you are watching TV. So that you are not going to name you TV.. kkkk Just kidding.i\'ll see you tomorrow! Have a good night!   Always, Kathrine ^^   Good afternoon Ms. [Name].>> correct! I agree your opinion that I need to challenge to use various words and I take a lot of practice the pronunciation. >> I agree with your opinion that I need to challenge when using various words and I should take a lot of practice in pronunciation. I should try to spend more time to study English. >> correct! >> OR: I should try spending more time studying in English. If I will, I should reduce the time to watch TV. >> correct! >> OR: If I will do that, I have to reduce my time watching TVGood bye~ Lovely TV! Y.Y >> correct!Anyway, I always thanks for your teaching. >> Anyway, I always thank you for your teaching. Please check my answer below and see you tommorow.>> correct!1. I have no idea where she is. >> correct!2. Could you tell me where is she gone? >> where she\'s3. I asked them where they were going. >> correct!4. Can you tell me how much will it cost? >> it will 5. Do you have any idea how long is it take me to do it? >> it took 6. Has she told you whether will she help? >> she will 7. Can you explain why is it so expensive? >> it\'s 8. She asked me where I come from.>> correct! 9. I was wondering why we don\'t take the train; it\'ll be quicker.>> correct! 10. Can you remember what she said? >> correct!

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