homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I think I'm a friendly person.
Because, I have a lot of friend.And I'm funny and I like laugh.I love myself,and also I'm a kind man.
So,alot of my friends always help me.I'm proud of myself.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon Tom ^ -^
How are you today? I am sure that you had a great time studying today.
You did a marvelous job! You wrote good sentences today.
Thank you for sending me an essay.^^ Keep on writing. ^^
Don\'t be scared to compose longer sentences, I know you can do it!
I know that you are a good person and I\'m so grateful to be your teacher.
See you in class! I\'m excited to talk about a lot of things tonight!
Teacher Nina
I think I\'m a friendly person.
>> Correct! Because, I have a lot of friend.
>> Because I have a lot of friends.
>> OR: It\'s because I have many friends.
And I\'m funny and I like laugh.
>> Did you mean: I\'m fun to be with and I like laughing.
>> OR: I\'m fun to be with and I laugh a lot.
I love myself,and also I\'m a kind man.
>> Correct! ( Check: proper spacing of words.^^)
>> OR: I love myself and I\'m a kind person. So,alot of my friends always help me.
>> Correct! ( Check: proper spacing of words.^^)
>> OR: A lot of my friends always help me.
>> OR: A lot of my friends lend a helping hand when I need them.
I\'m proud of myself.
>> Correct!
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