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2013-09-04 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I think I'm a friendly person. Because, I have a lot of friend.And I'm funny and I like laugh.I love myself,and also I'm a kind man. So,alot of my friends always help me.I'm proud of myself.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon Tom ^ -^ How are you today? I am sure that you had a great time studying today. You did a marvelous job! You wrote good sentences today. Thank you for sending me an essay.^^ Keep on writing. ^^ Don\'t be scared to compose longer sentences, I know you can do it! I know that you are a good person and I\'m so grateful to be your teacher. See you in class! I\'m excited to talk about a lot of things tonight! Teacher Nina I think I\'m a friendly person. >> Correct! Because, I have a lot of friend. >> Because I have a lot of friends. >> OR: It\'s because I have many friends. And I\'m funny and I like laugh. >> Did you mean: I\'m fun to be with and I like laughing. >> OR: I\'m fun to be with and I laugh a lot. I love myself,and also I\'m a kind man. >> Correct! ( Check: proper spacing of words.^^) >> OR: I love myself and I\'m a kind person. So,alot of my friends always help me. >> Correct!  ( Check: proper spacing of words.^^) >> OR: A lot of my friends always help me. >> OR: A lot of my friends lend a helping hand when I need them. I\'m proud of myself. >> Correct!

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