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2013-09-05 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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1. The whole army is out of step __with__ Fred. 2. I'll __take__ no money from that cheapskate. 3. Please __don't touch__ this pot of Mama's chicken soup. 4. It will cure anything ___including__ flat feet. 5. Rip could do anything ___to__ make money. 6. I had to __accept__ their negative evaluation. 7. All the girls went to the game ___expect__ Mary. 8. Howard could not __find__ the job. 9. __Although__ when there's a classic movie playing, Pete seldom watches TV. 10. I will ____present___ your gift if you let me pay for my lunch. - Diary - My mom complained a stomachache from last friday. Finally, she was hospitalized for an appendectomy. Therefore, I went to the hospital to see her with my father. I was so sad to see her sleeping in the patient rooms. I really hate the painful atmosphere of the hospital. I hope that she will get better as soon as possible.

강사 첨삭

Hi there how are you doing today? Thank you for answering your home work, I really appreciate it. It only shows your eagerness to improve your English skill. You\'re actually doing good. I also like your composition. Thank you again very much for your participation and just review these corrections I\'ve made. I am sorry about what happend to your mom. I hope too that she will get well soon. Let\'s hope for that^^ Have a great day and you take care. Bye. (^_^)   -Teacher Rose-   1. The whole army is out of step __with__ Fred.>> The whole army is out of step except Fred.2. I\'ll __take__ no money from that cheapskate.>>  I\'ll accept no money from that cheapskate.3. Please __don\'t touch__ this pot of Mama\'s chicken soup.>> Please accept this pot of Mama\'s chicken soup.4. It will cure anything ___including__ flat feet.>> It will cure anything except flat feet.5. Rip could do anything ___to__ make money.>> Rip could do anything except make money.6. I had to __accept__ their negative evaluation.>> Correct (^_^) 7. All the girls went to the game ___expect__ Mary.>> Correct (^_^) 8. Howard could not __find__ the job. >>Howard could not accept the job.9. __Although__ when there\'s a classic movie playing, Pete seldom watches TV.>> Except when there\'s a classic movie playing, Pete seldom watches TV.10. I will ____present___ your gift if you let me pay for my lunch.>> I will accept your gift if you let me pay for my lunch - Diary - My mom complained a stomachache from last friday. >> My mom complained for a stomachache last Friday. Finally, she was hospitalized for an appendectomy.>> Unfortunately, she was hospitalized for appendectomy. >> OR: She was diagnosed with appendectomy.Therefore, I went to the hospital to see her with my father. >> Correct (^_^)I was so sad to see her sleeping in the patient rooms.>> I feel sad to see her sleeping in the patient\'s room.I really hate the painful atmosphere of the hospital. >> I really hate the painful atmosphere at the hospital. I hope that she will get better as soon as possible. >> Correct (^_^)          

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