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Today, I saw several pictures on webpage which are about europe tour. Some people traveled europe, then, they took many pictires at some place where are famous as a remains. As soon as I saw their picture, I really envied them. There were many famous buildings which are so beautiful and popular as a remains in their countries. I just know them though the text book. Although I don't know them exactly, I wish to visit there. And I felt exotic feeling in thier picture, also background was so beautiful as much as attract me thoroughly. Thus,I decide to visit there in my next vacation.

Hello [이름], I do hope that you would have the chance to visit Europe next year. And while you are there, practice your English well..kekeke ^^kaye^^   Today, I saw several pictures on webpage which are about europe tour. >>Today, I saw several pictures on the Internet  about European tour. Some people traveled europe, then, they took many pictires at some place where are famous as a remains >>Some people traveled to Europe, then, they took many pictures of some places which are famous as remains of the past.  As soon as I saw their picture, I really envied them. >>When I saw the pictures, I really envied them. There were many famous buildings which are so beautiful and popular as a remains in their countries. >>There are many famous buildings which are so beautiful and popular as remains in their countries. I just know them though the text book. >> I just know them through the text books. Although I don't know them exactly, I wish to visit there. >>Although I don't exactly know them, I wish to visit there. And I felt exotic feeling in thier picture, also background was so beautiful as much as attract me thoroughly. >> And I had an exotic feeling on their pictures, also the background that are so beautiful  attracted me thoroughly. Thus,I decide to visit there in my next vacation. >>Thus, I decided to visit there on my next vacation.