Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
B. discussion
4. When you have a request for your boss, how do you approach him/her?
A: First, I make a draft. After I review the papers again, I submit him the paper of my request.
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강사 첨삭
Hi Jongu,
Here are some corrections for your composition.
I know you can be very busy sometimes but I would like to encourage you to write some more for you to practice expressing thoughts.
-Teacher Grace
B. discussion4. When you have a request for your boss, how do you approach him/her?A: First, I make a draft.
>>Correct
After I review the papers again, I submit him the paper of my request.
>> After I review what I wrote, I submit my request to him.
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