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2013-09-05 · 첨삭 강사 Aimee

학생이 쓴 원문

(when, until, till, after, before, since, while, at first, but then, where, because, so, therefore, that's why, but, who, which and that) 1. _When_ I have a test I'm always very nervous. 2. The exam was difficult _but_ Bob passed it easily. 3. I can't buy a new car _because_ I haven't got enough money. 4. _While_ we had had dinner we watched TV. 5. It's very late _so_ I'm very tired. 6. _At first_ we went to the shopping center then we went to the park. 7. I didn't know _where_ to go. 8. First we went to the cinema and _after_ we went to a restaurant. 9. _When_you cross the street you must look carefully. 10. It was very cold outside. _That's why_ we didn't go out. 11. I wanted to visit her _but_ I didn't have any time. 12. We visited Mr. [Name] _who_ has two dogs. 13. We stayed at home _because_ it was raining heavily. 14. He listened to her carefully _after_ then he told her what she could do. 15. He waited _until_ she woke up.

강사 첨삭

Good morning [이름] Na!
Thank you again for sending your homework.
I do understand that conjunctions are really hard to understand.
Read these and maybe you will be able to understand it clearer.
In grammar a conjunction  is a part of speech that connects two words, sentence, phrase or clauses. A discourse connective is a conjunction joining sentences. This definition may overlap with that of other parts of speech, so what constitutes a \"conjunction\" must be defined for each language. In general, a conjunction is an invariable grammatical particle, and it may or may not stand between the items it conjoins.
I hope these helped.
See you.

Always,
~Aimee^^

(when, until, till, after, before, since, while, at first, but then, where, because, so, therefore, that\'s why, but, who, which and that)
>> Correct

1. _When_ I have a test I\'m always very nervous.
>> Correct
2. The exam was difficult _but_ Bob passed it easily.
>> Correct
3. I can\'t buy a new car _because_ I haven\'t got enough money.
>> Correct
4. _While_ we had had dinner we watched TV.
>> After we had had dinner we watched TV.
5. It\'s very late _so_ I\'m very tired.
>> It\'s very late _and__ I\'m very tired.
6. _At first_ we went to the shopping center then we went to the park.
>> _After_ we went to the shopping center then we went to the park.
7. I didn\'t know _where_ to go.
>> Correct
8. First we went to the cinema and _after_ we went to a restaurant.
>> First we went to the cinema and _then__ we went to a restaurant.
9. _When_you cross the street you must look carefully.
>> _Before_ you cross the street you must look carefully.
10. It was very cold outside. _That\'s why_ we didn\'t go out.
>> It was very cold outside. _So_ we didn\'t go out.
11. I wanted to visit her _but_ I didn\'t have any time.
>> Correct
12. We visited Mr. [Name] _who_ has two dogs.
>> Correct
13. We stayed at home _because_ it was raining heavily.
>> Correct
14. He listened to her carefully _after_ then he told her what she could do.
>> He listened to her carefully  _and_ then he told her what she could do.
15. He waited _until_ she woke up.
>> Correct

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