homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. Typically, I post many pictures on web sites including my
homepage, communities. And if if find out good pictures while surfing webs, I make an effort to learn their camerawork.
2. No, I don't think so. Under any circumstances, the freedom of
expression has to be guranteed.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
Photography is a very good hobby. But as what we have said, it is expensive! ^^
Have fun in taking more pictures!
-Teacher Grace
1. Typically, I post many pictures on web sites including my homepage, communities.
>> Typically, I post many pictures on web sites including my homepage and communities.
And if find out good pictures while surfing webs, I make an effort to learn their camerawork.>> And if find out good pictures while surfing websites, I make an effort to learn their camera work.2. No, I don't think so.
>>Correct
Under any circumstances, the freedom of expression has to be guaranteed.
>>Correct
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