Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
It is the day to get a skin care service today. My face skin is much better than before. So I'm happy. When I get a stree, I feel that my skin goes bad.
Anyway, I don't have enough time. I should go aesthetic shop.
Bye Bye and see you tommorrow.
"I'm afraid for some reason." Sometimes you find courage to do something unusual. For you, what would that be?
To set an object is important when you do something. If you have a goal, you will take courage to do something. Therefore I alwaly state an object before begining. However when you face a difficulty like bungee jumping, it will be useless anything. You should win yourself at that situation.
강사 첨삭
Good evening Ms. [Name] [이름]! Wow, you are making yourself beautiful again. hahaha
Anyway, go and make yourself beautiful. Why not?
I hope to see your beautiful face.
No kidding.
Anyway, bungee jumping? How the hell did it go there in your composition? kkkkk
I tried doing it beofre and I enjoyed it.
It was so scarry at first but once you do it again, it will be enjoyable.
I swear.
Try to do it even once.
I promise you will enjoy. ^^
I\'ll see you tomorrow then! Have a good night!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
It is the day to get a skin care service today.
>> Today is the day to have a skin care.
My face skin is much better than before.
>> My face\'s skin is much better than before.
So I\'m happy.
>> correct!
When I get a stree, I feel that my skin goes bad.
>> When I am stressed, I feel that my skin goes bad. Anyway, I don\'t have enough time.
>> correct!
I should go aesthetic shop.
>> I should go to the aesthetic shop. Bye Bye and see you tommorrow.
>> correct!
\"I\'m afraid for some reason.\" Sometimes you find courage to do something unusual. For you, what would that be?To set an object is important when you do something.
>> correct!
If you have a goal, you will take courage to do something.
>> correct!
Therefore I alwaly state an object before begining.
>> correct
>> OR: Therefore, I always make an objective before beginning to do something.
However when you face a difficulty like bungee jumping, it will be useless anything.
>> However, when you face a difficult situation like bungee jumping, that thing will be useless.
You should win yourself at that situation.
>> correct!
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