Homework

2013-09-06 · 첨삭 강사 Giselle

학생이 쓴 원문

1. the camera / Tom -> Tom's camera 2. the eyes / the cat -> the cat's eyes 3. the names / friends -> the names of friends 4. the daughter / Mr. [Name] -> the daughter of Mr. [Name] 5. the toys / the children -> the toys of the children Yesterday, some of my co-workers and I had a dinner together to celebrate the co-worker whose birthday was. We were four and went to the wine bar nearby our office. We drank a bottle of sparkling wine and two bottles of red wine. We talked a lot and had a very good time. I drank more alchol than usual. Today I got hangover and I am very tired.

강사 첨삭

Good Morning! Happy Friday to you!

Thank you for doing your homework and for sharing your experience. I appreciate it!

I\'m happy you\'ve enjoyed your dinner. Don\'t worry about the hangover! It will pass soon.

What is important is that you\'ve enjoyed it.

Have a great day! See you!

~ Teacher Chloe~

1. the camera / Tom
-> Tom\'s camera

>> Correct!
2. the eyes / the cat
-> the cat\'s eyes

>> Correct!
3. the names / friends
-> the names of friends

>>  friend\'s names
4. the daughter / Mr. [Name]
-> the daughter of Mr. [Name]
>> Mr. [Name]\'s daughter

5. the toys / the children
-> the toys of the children
>> children\'s toys

Yesterday, some of my co-workers and I had a dinner together to celebrate the co-worker whose birthday was.

>> Yesterday, some of my co-workers and I had dinner together to celebrate our co-worker\'s birthday.
We were four and went to the wine bar nearby our office.

>> We were four. We went to the wine bar nearby our office.
We drank a bottle of sparkling wine and two bottles of red wine.

>> Correct!
We talked a lot and had a very good time.

>> Correct!

>> We talked about a lot of things and had a very good time.
I drank more alchol than usual.

>> I drank more alcohol than usual.
Today I got hangover and I am very tired.

>> Today,  I got a hangover and I am very tired.^^

 

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