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2013-09-05 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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Hi Kathrine! Today's class was so fun and interesting!! Specially, I fascinated when you spoke in Korean "아니오" And from yesterday, I have known that you live in Korea ! That's why Power English is Korean site and so that you can help so many Korean people. If you were in Korea, I could introduce some best tasting restaurant! Anyway, I'll start today's homework, and see you tomorrow!^^ "I'm afraid for some reason." Sometimes you find courage to do something unusual. For you, what would that be? I'm afraid for speaking in front of many people. It's so difficult for me to transfer my thoughts to the audience. Because when I recieve attention, I'm so nervous..... However nowdays, I tried to improve my presentation skills. So I practice it myself..

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A great evening to you Ms. [이름]! ^^ Actually, I\'m about to go to bed when I saw your composition. So that I will not do it anymore tomorrow, I just decide to finish it tonight. kkkk Anyway, I am trying to elarn how to speak in Korean. I am learning from my students too. |And Power English is owned by Koreans too so they know what Koreans really need. So they we really cater each and every student that we have.  I am happy that you are one of them.   I\'ll see you tomorrow! Have a great night! Take a good rest and a good night sleep. Don\'t let the bed bugs bite! ^^   Always, Kathrine ^^       Hi Kathrine! >> correct!Today\'s class was so fun and interesting!! >> correct! Specially, I fascinated when you spoke in Korean \"아니오\" >> correct! >> OR: I was specially fascinated when you spoke in Korean. And from yesterday, I have known that you live in Korea ! >> correct!That\'s why Power English is Korean site and so that you can help so many Korean people. >> That\'s why Power English is a Korean site so that you can help so many Korean people. If you were in Korea, I could introduce some best tasting restaurant! >> correct!Anyway, I\'ll start today\'s homework, and see you tomorrow!^^>> correct! \"I\'m afraid for some reason.\" Sometimes you find courage to do something unusual. For you, what would that be?I\'m afraid for speaking in front of many people. >> I\'m afraid to speak in front of many people. It\'s so difficult for me to transfer my thoughts to the audience. >> corerct! Because when I recieve attention, I\'m so nervous..... >> correct! >> OR:  Because when I get people\'s attention, I\'m so nervous. However nowdays, I tried to improve my presentation skills. >> However nowadays, I am trying to improve my presentation skills. So I practice it myself.. >> correct! >> OR: So I\'m practicing it myself.

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