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2013-09-06 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Write something about the latest invention human made that is very useful nowadays. Explain why is it very useful and how does it help people in everyday life. I think that the latest invention human made that is very useful nowadays is cell phones. Cell phones have so many functions and features. The basic function of cell phones is making and receiving a phone call. People can easily contact each other with cell phones anytime and anywhere. Especially, cell phones are very useful in an emergency. The other function of cell phones is that people can download movies , music videos and games and surf the internet. People use cell phones like TV, camera, game player and computer. They wouldn't seem to live without cell phones nowadays.

강사 첨삭

Hello there!!

A pleasant afternoon~~

Thanks for doing this homework for me. :)

You are right! Cell phones are everywhere these days and even kids have it already. ^^

You\'ve shared your ideas well. Good job!

Please check the minor correction I made here.

Have a great day and see you!

T.Camille^^

Write something about the latest invention human made that is very useful nowadays. Explain why is it very useful and how does it help people in everyday life.
I think that the latest invention human made that is very useful nowadays is cell phones. Cell phones have so many functions and features.

>>  I think that the latest invention human made that is very useful nowadays are cell phones. CORRECT!!
The basic function of cell phones is making and receiving a phone call. People can easily contact each other with cell phones anytime and anywhere.

>> CORRECT!!  CORRECT!!

 Especially, cell phones are very useful in an emergency.

>> CORRECT!!

 The other function of cell phones is that people can download movies , music videos and games and surf the internet.

>> CORRECT!!
People use cell phones like TV, camera, game player and computer. They wouldn\'t seem to live without cell phones nowadays.

>> CORRECT!!  CORRECT!!

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