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Thanks for doing this homework for me. :)
You are right! Cell phones are everywhere these days and even kids have it already. ^^
You\'ve shared your ideas well. Good job!
Please check the minor correction I made here.
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T.Camille^^
Write something about the latest invention human made that is very useful nowadays. Explain why is it very useful and how does it help people in everyday life.
I think that the latest invention human made that is very useful nowadays is cell phones. Cell phones have so many functions and features.
>> I think that the latest invention human made that is very useful nowadays are cell phones. CORRECT!!
The basic function of cell phones is making and receiving a phone call. People can easily contact each other with cell phones anytime and anywhere.
>> CORRECT!! CORRECT!!
Especially, cell phones are very useful in an emergency.
>> CORRECT!!
The other function of cell phones is that people can download movies , music videos and games and surf the internet.
>> CORRECT!!
People use cell phones like TV, camera, game player and computer. They wouldn\'t seem to live without cell phones nowadays.
>> CORRECT!! CORRECT!!
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