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Describe a place you will never forget. I have many places which I cannot forget at all. But if I have to [이름]ose only one place, my [이름]ice would be the mirror room which is located in the Versailles Palace. I visited there on my last vacation and when I entered the room, I was shocked by its amazing feature. It was literally AMAZING. The room was full of golden things, statues, jewels and the mirror in there showed us the Versailles's big canal locating behind the palace. The size of the room wasn't that big but I was overwhelmed by its gorgeousness. I saw many beautiful and fantastic structures when I was traveling Europe(Does this sentence need 'to'?) but not a thing can make me get gooseflesh. Only the mirror room could do. If someone can have a chance to visit France, I would definitely tell him or her that he/she should visit the Versailles Palace. Thank you.

Hello there! Thank you for doing your homework. I appreciate your effort and patience in doing this composition.You are very creative in making your composition because you use different and not common vocabularies. Good job! I hope someday I can also visit Versailles Palace.:) Well, enjoy your weekend. Take care always!See you on Monday. Teacher Erine^^    I have many places which I cannot forget at all. >>I visited many places that I cannot forget at all. But if I have to [이름]ose only one place, my [이름]ice would be the mirror room which is located in the Versailles Palace. >>If I have to [이름]ose only one place, my [이름]ice would be the mirror room that is located in  Versailles Palace. I visited there on my last vacation and when I entered the room, I was shocked by its amazing feature. >>I visited Versailles Palace during my last vacation and when I entered the room  I was shocked by its amazing feature.  It was literally AMAZING. >>Correct The room was full of golden things, statues, jewels and the mirror in there showed us the Versailles\'s big canal locating behind the palace. The size of the room wasn\'t that big but I was overwhelmed by its gorgeousness. >>Correct.  I saw many beautiful and fantastic structures when I was traveling Europe(Does this sentence need \'to\'?) but not a thing can make me get gooseflesh. >>I saw many beautiful and fantastic structures when I travelled Europe ( It is possible to use or not to use \'to\') but not a thing can make me get goosebumps. Only the mirror room could do. If someone can have a chance to visit France, I would definitely tell him or her that he/she should visit the Versailles Palace.>>Correct.Thank you. >>Correct.