homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, I give money to beggars or homeless people.
Because they are hungry and thirsty.
If I gave them a money,they can buy food and water.
Then, maybe they reward about our good act.
강사 첨삭
Happy Monday Tom^^
How was your day? Thank you for sending me this in.^^
Wow! You are really a good person!
I salute you for that. I know that your parents are proud of you.
We should not forget to help others when they are in need.
We should also share what we have for us to receive more blessings.
Keep on writing! See you later in class.
Teacher Nina
Yes, I give money to beggars or homeless people.
>> Correct!
>> OR: Yes, I give money to less fortunate people.Because they are hungry and thirsty.
>> Correct!If I gave them a money,they can buy food and water.
>> If I give them money,they can buy food and water.Then, maybe they reward about our good act.
>> Then, maybe someday they will be able to reward our good deed.
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