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What is your dream vacation? My dream vacation differs every time. Usually,I wanted my vacation to be full of traveling to other countries. But, after I spent all of my last vacation traveling, now I hope my next vacation have my own private time, alone. I want to be a deeper person. I mean, I want to be a great woman. What I would do is studying English, espanol, computer and reading books. Also, I would play and learn Ukulele. Also, I want to meet my old friends and teachers. When I was on travel, even though I really like traveling to other countries, I missed them. I just want myself to be a person who can hear 'She developed herself a lot'. So, finally, my dream vacation would be a common vacation, just like most people spend theirs.

Hello there! Thank you for this wonderful composition. I hope you can find that chance to spend time alone. Go and explore ways on how you can improve yourself! Here are the corrections I made for you! - T. Erine   What is your dream vacation?My dream vacation differs every time. >> Correct! Usually,I wanted my vacation to be full of traveling to other countries. >> Usually, I want my vacation to be full of travels to other countries. But, after I spent all of my last vacation traveling, now I hope my next vacation have my own private time, alone. >> But after I spent my last vacation traveling, I now hope to have my own private time alone on my next vacation. I want to be a deeper person. >> Correct! I mean, I want to be a great woman. >> Correct! What I would do is studying English, espanol, computer and reading books. >> What I would do is study English, Spanish, computer and read books. Also, I would play and learn Ukulele. >> Also I would learn how to play the ukulele. Also, I want to meet my old friends and teachers. >> Correct! When I was on travel, even though I really like traveling to other countries, I missed them. >> Correct! I just want myself to be a person who can hear \'She developed herself a lot\'. >> I just want myself to be a person who can hear, \"She developed a lot.\", from my friends or other people.So, finally, my dream vacation would be a common vacation, just like most people spend theirs. >> So, finally, my dream vacation would be a common vacation, just like how most people spend theirs.